Some believe that the governments should control the carrying out of scientific projects, while others argue private firms would be more capable of that. I totally agree that the interference of government is of benefit because it will have a profound impact on the success and usefulness of projects.
On the one hand, the governments have power and finance enough to conduct the experiments successfully. Firstly, many kinds of research require cooperation and collaboration by the authorities, so companies and organisations can not control them.
For example, the research about global warming acquires the coordination between developed and developing countries, and then they could handle the environmental problems by themself. The act of companies is not enough to fully tackle this issue. Secondly, the governments are able to provide enormous financial assistance to various research projects. If research fails to achieve objectives, the authority has the resources to compensate for losses.
On the other hand, the only motive of the government is to ensure public welfare, while profit is the companies' priority. As a result, projects conducted by organisations often suffer suspicion from the public, and they could withdraw if the company's finance can not meet the demand for purchasing all the fees. As an example, pharmacy companies usually advertise their drugs which can maximise their profit and fame, despite the quality of the products. Moreover, without the government's control, some companies could carry out illegal research such as nuclear weapons or unethical human experimentation, which pose a serious threat to people and society.
In conclusion, I agree with the statement that scientific projects should be put under governments' control to ensure their accuracy, efficiency and applicability.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of government spending on roads and transport in 4 countries in the years 1990 1995 2000 and 2005
- The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups 78
- The maps show the information about changes of Kingsville city since 2002 73
- Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63176895307 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03988697537 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602888086643 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7029347694 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285377325874 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915997638357 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736204449945 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156556072961 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595711166293 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.