People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Human life-span are expected to be expanded due to enhancement in many aspects of humankind. This trend has both benefits and drawbacks, which will be elaborated below.
On the one hand, as humans live longer, people now are able to contribute more to societies than their counterparts in the past. This is deeply rooted in the fact that elderly workers who have accumulated decades of experience, could extend their employment thus create more values to their workplaces. To illustrate, Warren Buffet, a legend American investor who is over 100 years old is currently mangaging his company which constantly outperform other businesses in the finance industry. Thus, the longer people live, the more contribution they can make to the world.
Conversely, larger population of senior citizens could cause greater burden on healthcare system. The old often takes a noticeable part of government funding. This is particularly the case for Canada and Japan, in which old people constitutes a large proportion of the total population. By paying for hospitals, nursing home and salary to maintain suffcient infrastructure and medical services, the authorities may not be able to fund other priorities such as education or science which are fundamental for future development of nations. Therefore, it is also problematic when people's life is extended.
In the light of these facts, people's longer life-span can benefit to their company and their society as a whole, albeit it could be a challenge to social welfare system of countries. I believe that people could achieve more if our life is prolonged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, may, so, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27058823529 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91139431195 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3754375007 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140649138174 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530116438252 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048055535502 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792746958549 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262834731865 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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