Some people feel that boarding schools are excellent option for children while other people disagree for a number of reasons consider both sides of the debate
Nowadays, boarding schools are usually chosen by a lot of parents due to many benefits and values. Gradually, it become a top pick and trend for studying, an excellent and interesting option for their children. However, some people believe that boarding schools are constraining their kids to developing. Thus, this essay below will show my opinions about this issue somehow.
To begin with the first state of thinkings, boarding schools, especially top schools, the quality of teaching is could not be ignored. Basically, most of boarding schools always promise about the quality standard and quantity of students, teachers and facilities. Besides, the dormitories are usually cleaned at the weekend thus students can totally feel as their homes. Whereas, there have been many problems about food safety and a lot of scholars was poisoned. Since then, many people are concerned about sending their children to boarding schools.
To the other side of thoughts, currently, most boarding schools often require a rather high tuition fee compared to the standard rates in other types of schools. Thus that is pretty limited in terms of how many families can send their children to boarding schools, especially good schools. Besides, most children with an introverted way of life often find it difficult to adjust to a new environment, especially at boarding schools. Usually spending most of the week and a weekend in boarding schools can make it difficult for children to bond with their families. A school environment where it is difficult to make friends and no time with family can lead to a child's mindset and development. However, boarding schools often have quite strict and disciplined rules, which can teach children to become more responsible for themselves as well as society. Most boarding schools usually meet the standards of teaching qualifications as well as they are committed to the quality of students after attending the school.
In conclusion, I personally believe that the choice for children to go to school depends on the standard of living, the family's finances as well as the child's personality. Boarding schools are often suitable for young people from 16-18 years old, especially at the high school level because they are independent enough and mature enough to take care of themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1946.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2311827957 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.715186838 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513440860215 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0495372744 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.111111111 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272028059163 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909298675723 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064867317756 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179736915351 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522972504332 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.