A large number of deaths are caused by road accidents. why do so many road accidents occur? Make recommendations that could help to reduce their number.
A huge number of deaths occurred due to road accidents. There are many reasons behind this accident. Some of them are discussed below. As the number of people is increasing, the number of vehicles are also increased but the size of the road is still the same as it was before. And the other reason might be that; the carelessness of the drivers as well as the people who walk on the road. These problems can be solved by widening the road, limitations of the vehicle, and strong policies should be made for the drivers, also zebra crossings and footpaths for those who walk on the road.
Firstly, the number of vehicle on the road is increasing day by day. People want to live a luxurious life so they own their own vehicles. And it can also be seen that the condition of road is not changed that results in accidents. So, the area of road should be made wider and the system of one way should be implemented. There should be different roads for two different directions which might be helpful in preventing accidents.
In addition to; carelessness of drivers is another reason for occurrence of large number of road accidents. Drivers get drunk before they drive since there is no strict rules for them. Government should focus on this and create a policy and implement them accordingly. Traffic checking should be strong. And for those who walk, zebra crossings and footpaths should be made so that they will walk on them. Traffic lights should also be checked and they should follow them too. Fine can be charged for those who destroy the government's policy.
In conclusion, most of the road accidents cause death; due to lack of awareness among people, lack of attention of government towards the condition of the road and lose policies that are made but not implemented. Strong actions should be taken for both the drivers and the walkers which definitely reduces road accidents. Hence, it is a major subject matter; that measures should be taken in order to control road accidents which is increasing daily.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 522, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...an be charged for those who destroy the governments policy. In conclusion, most of the roa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, still, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75213675214 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52355724446 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464387464387 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4332632099 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4285714286 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232686321711 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801617337593 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776974754726 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162881411401 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662710291532 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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