The bar chart represents the proportion of the way population in a country in the question accessed news in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
As can be seen from the chart, except for internet, which has its approachers increased in number, other media, namely, television, newspaper and radio experienced different drops through out the period.
Started with the highest percentage of the population, television as a way to reach the news slightly fell for about 10% after two years. However, more people obtain news through tv as the chart shows a rise in television accessing at the end of the period with 70%. Begun with the lowest proportion, internet accessing number rose steadily through out the time. From 30% in 2013, it rose to 40% and then finally reached its peak in 2018 with nearly 80%.
Printed newspaper started with a higher ratio than radio, however, at the year end, the percentage of people read newspaper was lower than that of radio listeners. The reason is that while radio accessing proportion remained stably from 2015 to 2017 at 30%, newspaper readers which account for 30% in 2015 dropped for almost 10% and ended with 22% in 2017.
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- The charts below show the proportion of expenditure by students on average at one university in 2000 and 2010 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The plans below show the layout of the ground floor of a museum in 1990 and in 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 53
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
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Message: Did you mean 'throughout'?
Suggestion: throughout
...internet accessing number rose steadily through out the time. From 30% in 2013, it rose to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, then, while, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88265306122 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50111907482 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586734693878 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5500891698 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.625 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179328992378 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087018187781 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699508547396 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128007485728 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707488699883 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.