Leaders are created by the demands that are placed on them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
While it may be true that some leaders are created by the demands placed on them, I must point out that there also exists many leaders who started their leadership with few followers and struggled a lot to accomplish the things they are famous for.
First of all, many artists and designers were the first to develop a new form of art or a new style, which only became famous and accepted years after their introduction. The world famous Dutch artist Van Gogh, for example, painted some of the world's most famous paintings, but he remained unsuccessful and poor during his lifetime. Most of his paintings were yet to be sold when he commited suicide, but now, hundreds of years after his dealth, he is considered one of the greatest painters and his paintings can easily sell for billions of dollars. Van Gogh is undoubtfully one of the leaders of painting, but he was not created by the demands placed on him -- he was hardly influenced by his audiences because he met few, if not none, of them during his lifetime.
In addition, some leaders develop their leadership at a time where there were some demands placed on them, but no one knew what was demanded. Take the founding father of modern China, Sun Yat-sen, for example. It was in the early 20th century, China was still an imperial regime ruled by an emperor. Many Chinese peasents were discontent about heavy taxes, no social mobility, no freedom to move across the country, and many other constrains that have been placed on the peasents since ancient times, but they had no idea what they needed. Note that most farmers at the time did not spend a single day at school and most of them did not know anything about modern societies. Sun Yat-sen started a revolution that ultimately led to the collapse of Qing dynasty and the establishment of the first ever republic regime in Asia, it was because of Sun's leadershp that the Chinese peasents learned about and experienced democracy the first time.
In sum, even though some leaders are shaped by the demands placed on them, some leaders led to demands of things unprecedented. Therefore, I disagree with the author's claim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...h artist Van Gogh, for example, painted some of the worlds most famous paintings, but he re...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun other seems to be countable; consider using: 'many others'.
Suggestion: many others
...freedom to move across the country, and many other constrains that have been placed on the...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 372.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76075268817 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47167830149 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534946236559 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.9998259657 60.3974514979 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.230769231 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.6153846154 23.4991977007 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 5.21951772744 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12473028746 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503917767421 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434420258065 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972753388609 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410865155625 0.0667264976115 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.1392134831 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 100.480337079 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.