Young people should be encouraged to pursue long-term, realistic goals rather
than seek immediate fame and recognition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or
might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The prompts claim that we usually learn much more from like-minded people whose views contradict our own because disagreement can cause tenson, demotivation, and impede learning. The given topic is highly contentious because different people may have disparate positions and opinions on the topic. Some may go for the topic, while other cannot argue with it at all. I both agree and disagree with the topic that we can usually learn much more from people whose views we can share than those whose views contradict our own. The three reasons and examples to support my positions are presented in the following paragraphs below.
Firstly, most of the people whose life is set from long-term realistic goals. In long term realistic gaol, many people are focus on carrier rather than present happiness at that time. For instance, a scientist Thomas Edition is invented in light bulbs after the thousands of tries, after that he became a successful to invent light bulb. In present, an advancement of all electricity area are based on her research. Additionally, he know about light and electricity is crucial for human being in future. If he can't focus on long term realistic goal, the whole world can't be developed properly. In effect, People must focus long term goal rather than present happiness.
Secondly, most of the people have their own dream to make something in their lifetime, and also that become a goal of those peoples. For instance, a scientist madam curie found the radium during her study, moreover this is most popular research in her life. Furthermore, The radium is used for the treatment o cancer disease. She was very happy after discovaries of radium, If she can't focus on that research, the medicine of cancer can't be develop, also most of people are suffering from cancer disease in present life. Consequently, future gaols provide more happiness rather than present goal.
lastly, the another example to support that statement is Albert Einstein, he discover the theory of relativity which is most popular research in their carrier If can't focus to their search, the world can't develop in proper way. Thus, people must focus their long term realistic goal.
In sum/conclusion, the reasons and examples presented to support the claim/position that both consonant and dissonant with the given statement. The essay highlights the young people could be encourage to persued long-term, realistic goals rather than seek and immediate fame and recognization. The examples of Madam Curie and Thomas Edition are illustrate to support the given essay.
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- Some people believe that corporations have a responsibility to promote the well being of the societies and environments in which they operate Others believe that the only responsibility of corporations provided they operate within the law is to make as mu 75
- Claim Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive 50
- Governments should place few if any restrictions on scientific research and development
- Many important discoveries or creations are accidental it is usually while seeking the answer to one question that we come across the answer to another Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and 50
- Claim Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system Reason Laws cannot change what is in people s hearts or minds Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...hile other cannot argue with it at all. I both agree and disagree with the topic ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es to support my positions are presented in the following paragraphs below. Fi...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...based on her research. Additionally, he know about light and electricity is crucial...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earch. Additionally, he know about light and electricity is crucial for human bei...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...rucial for human being in future. If he cant focus on long term realistic goal, the ...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...rucial for human being in future. If he cant focus on long term realistic goal, the ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ng term realistic goal, the whole world cant be developed properly. In effect, Peopl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lifetime, and also that become a goal of those peoples. For instance, a scientist...
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Message: You used three nouns after one another, and this might decrease readability. You might consider rewording the sentence.
...goal of those peoples. For instance, a scientist madam curie found the radium during her study, more...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ppy after discovaries of radium, If she cant focus on that research, the medicine of...
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Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cants'.
Suggestion: cants
...ppy after discovaries of radium, If she cant focus on that research, the medicine of...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n that research, the medicine of cancer cant be develop, also most of people are suf...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...edicine of cancer cant be develop, also most of people are suffering from cancer disease in p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., also most of people are suffering from cancer disease in present life. Conseque...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...happiness rather than present goal. lastly, the another example to support that st...
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'discovers'.
Suggestion: discovers
...t that statement is Albert Einstein, he discover the theory of relativity which is most ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...st popular research in their carrier If cant focus to their search, the world cant d...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...f cant focus to their search, the world cant develop in proper way. Thus, people mus...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ization. The examples of Madam Curie and Thomas Edition are illustrate to support...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'illustrated'.
Suggestion: illustrated
... of Madam Curie and Thomas Edition are illustrate to support the given essay.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 2235.4752809 97% => OK
No of words: 419.0 442.535393258 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15035799523 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62252402772 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 215.323595506 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498806682578 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2322747348 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0909090909 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0454545455 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.59090909091 5.21951772744 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236202149067 0.243740707755 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768495993419 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079580769125 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135679312645 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637848299728 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.