Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
Technology has become a global using method, there is an increase in the number of users in each country. However, some people and scientists say that it has made the work more easier, helped people be more active while others argue that it made people more busy, dispersed relatives and families. Technology has been a change point in connecting and inventing new things. This essay will discuss whether technology made work easier or not.
At the first place, workplaces are full of employees who don’t usually have time even to speak, with the new technology method they now can be less stressed, aside to be capable of finishing more of there work projects. To clarify, workers can use some programs to write and safe documents which has better security. Not to mention being able to send and receive approvals and suggestions faster in order to manage your time. Furthermore, the world is developing to the point of using technology in everything, for example, in many countries they use phones to pay bills, some cards can allow you to inter different places, and have the full entry to some folders and documents.
On the other hand, being busy and don’t have time is the main argue, some believe that it affected on everyone’s live and asaspect. To inhance, as it helps to finish work faster, it increased the amount of it which made workers more busy. Also, their full reliance on it exceed the amount of time they spend using it. Moreover, it had a huge impact on relationships and increased the gap between family members, also created some sort of misunderstanding of each other ideas.
To summarize, the invention of technology will stay as one of the greatest ideas human ever did. In my opinion, being allowed to access different sites that my help you, or have improved programs to develop your work and enhance your workability will motivate you to get your work done. Finally, humans are built differently, each person has a point of view, there is a quote says: “ Technology is best when it brings people together.”
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...cientists say that it has made the work more easier, helped people be more active while oth...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, sort of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84045584046 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57222202894 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566951566952 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7818299155 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.266666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294220669029 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906553656352 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877130742531 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183315819941 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133762190297 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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