Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
The argumentation about new technology is a discussion that reaches almost everyone in the modern era. In the 1990's, when the Internet began to emerge, many people thought that it would not last long. Modern technology has its impact on every field of life, whether this effect is positive or negative.
Many people believe that technology is something that helps meet human needs. For instance, nowadays, the whole world has become familiar with digital transformation. By using such new technologies, people can improve their communications. They can easily talk to relatives abroad using mobile phones. In addition, supporting Internet and new techniques in work environments assist improving productivity and efficiency.
Others believe that modern technology hampers our brains, undermines our communication because it makes people more busy. They thought that it transmits false information. For example, some people scare using visa cards feeling security risk in relation to data. This kind of people think that depression and other mental health issues could increase by extra use of new technologies.
To sum up, the debate about modern technology exists all over the world. Some like to use technology, others not.
As far as I’m concerned, new technologies facilitate our life, work, and everywhere you look technology is being used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57692307692 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9171086591 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7112167481 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264385357613 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823707122098 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0498957695046 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140701947226 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490400329748 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.49 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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