Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
Modern technology is one of the things that has helped the world to become more comfortable. Modern technology is happened a great difference in the whole world. Many people agree that Modern technology is consuming the time and has a big effect on youth, but others see that the modern technology is a very important and useful way to achieve meaningful goals. This topic will discuss the pros and cons of Modern technology.
Modern technology is a double edged weapon some people using it as a helpful tool like learning online courses , working from home ,making an advertising for products they make it at home and also investing online. No body can ignore that modern technology make a huge impact on some people . With a better understanding of different types of technology, people will understand how each type of technology can help improve your daily life, and perhaps, this knowledge can even help you develop a desire for a career in technology.
people trying to find more efficient ways to do things and testing new ideas. Technology is constantly improving and generally aims to make processes easier for people.
Modern technology is helping in many sector like
communication, electrical, energy, manufacturing, medical and transportation.
Many people consider the internet to be the most popular, helpful and powerful communication technology. Now a days most of people can't let their phone off owing to working or chatting maybe playing video games and stuff.
Medical technology helps improve people's quality of life in a number of ways. the doctors use a expensive equipment for serious surgery, they saveing people's lives.
Modern technology has some cons for example
It's increase the risk that people may lose their jobs because of using robots in the future they will replace the human beings with machines or what they call it" robots " .
Also the more they use the modern technology the more the harmful will increase may be when the robot loses control on the industry maybe will destroy the all building , studying on phones effect on eyes badly.
It's also consuming time as making people busier.
Social media can be hacked by strangers, spying on people and it's increase the popularity that the people maybe lose their jobs reputation.
As said before modern technology is very important ,but sometimes it costs a lot. My opinion that using modern technology is very helpful for students and workers , but it is so bad for children it's may cause autism for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2109.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 413.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10653753027 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67216313211 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537530266344 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9419345004 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.166666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9444444444 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94444444444 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290465364494 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105898066774 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456562930148 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11516546404 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474191733691 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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