Some people say that the increasing use of modern technology has made work a lot easier and quicker to accomplish. Others, however, argue that it has only made people busier.
In our contemporary world, most people use various gadgets to achieve their tasks faster. The technology could have both pros and cons. There are two teams that argue different perspectives about using technology and how it can affect our lives.
On one hand, there is a team that supports the idea of depending on modern technology as it assists a lot in doing daily tasks. In other words, some scientists have invented great devices may help a lot in communication with other people and getting information that you need to know. In addition, instead of writing by tradition ways, now you can write, copy and print faster than before. Moreover, you can communicate with whoever you like. For instance: if you have a friend or a family member who lives abroad, you can contact with him/her easily by a voice and/or video call. Furthermore, you can catch many opportunities to apply for a job in a foreign country by using the internet.
On the other hand, there is a team that opposes this idea. They tend to see that technology has some disadvantages. Firstly, some youth have used to be busy by surfing the internet just to waste their time. Secondly, being busy may cause harmful results on your social life. Thirdly, it affects the children who use modern technology without their parents’ control and time limiting. Consequently, it may change people from extrovert to introvert because they always deal with just a screen not feelings or emotions. Although they know the risk they take, they can not prioritize their actions.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, the inventors may discover more and more options to develop the contemporary technology. So, all ages have to control their usages in a helpful way. Finally, from my own perspective, I suggest using the internet in a right way because it’s hard to live without it like before.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, in addition, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.853125 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63754257963 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609375 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3253083599 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.89473684211 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158340939424 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483075227213 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447666575312 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932931218638 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387236964978 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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