Your have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centers in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion. Writer a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter say which points in the article you agree with explain ways in which your town center is different from most other town centers. offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article.
Dear Steve,
I am writing this letter to express my views on your article published in The Hindu last Saturday, which states that all city centers are lookalike in our nation.
Firstly, I would like to appreciate your work as you have covered all the basic details of different town halls. I agree that not only the architectural design, but the color of these halls is also the same, based on the traditional theme of our country. In addition, the interior of all these buildings is done as per the guidelines of the government, hence are designed using the same kind of material.
However, I would like to draw your attention towards the qualities that make each city center different. If you have a close look at them, you can see an essence of the regional history and culture. Furthermore, there is a variety of handicrafts and carvings on the walls of the hall, all unique in their own way.
I would be glad to give you a detailed tour of my town as I have a deep knowledge of the cultural diversity of my area. I will be looking forward to hear from you.
Thanks and Regards
Austin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...y of my area. I will be looking forward to hear from you. Thanks and Regards Austin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 907.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55778894472 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5333910576 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638190954774 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.466768916 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246100719244 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780234775187 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688957884611 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141971113633 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634529940417 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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