In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that the products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
Commercials are often seen not only on roadside hoardings and television, but also on social platforms which are free of cost. Thus, to grab the attention of consumers, companies state extraordinary qualities of their respective goods. The pros and cons will be scrutinized in the forthcoming paragraphs before venturing a conclusion.
A lot of competition in markets gives a wide range of options to the buyers whomsoever it may concern. In order to stand out, business owners add new features into their products such as no cross tracking introduced by Apple in their mobile phones. Moreover, this characteristic has not been offered by any other brand and a tantalizing marketing made these phones bestsellers in the launching year itself. Eventually, people get benefited with the advanced goods admist the competitive environment.
On the paradoxical side, many producers drop the quality of products just to be eye catching. Although the prices are lesser, the used material is compromised for its standards. Furthermore, some edible items are victim of this race, as seen in a variety of packed juices which are sold globally. Even though the packaging appears to be same, separate qualities are exported and made available in local markets. On being endorsed by celebrities which is entirely misleading, the dwellers are more keen on trying such products and suffer the consequences.
Summing up, in the era of advancement, it is necessary for purchasers to have brand awareness while choosing a thing to be bought. I opine that there is a need for positive changes in their available items and it can be achieved by interference of legal authorities before asserting it to be a positive development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, may, moreover, so, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20955882353 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05197329311 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658088235294 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8971017329 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114766057188 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312796032356 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415456129762 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598199200678 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278253647143 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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