Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is, in fact, the general welfare of all its people.
If we were to talk about Germany, we all know that Albert Einstein and Hitler belong from there. These are one of many geniuses Germany produced as one is greatest Physics Professor of all time and other the one who started world war II. If we take America George Washington and Abraham Lincoln. In case of India, we have Mother Teresa, Vivekananda , Mahatma Gandhi, Bhagat Singh. These are some of the people majorly who represent out countries in various fields and show how our countries developed sue to some of their decisions.
I do not completely agree with the statement "Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists. Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is, in fact, the general welfare of all its people" , it is primarily because the people who had achieved greatness show how great our country is, i.e. If Albert Einstein did not create Einstein's Theory of Relativity, then nobody would have known his name then nobody would figure that he cam from Germany and the education and knowledge given to students there is so good that it can create people with great knowledge. For Example:- If we take a university where all students who became CEO's after graduating represent State/Country in which they studied and the institutions gain fame such that many people will look up to it and it increases nation's greatness in a way.
If we do not have anyone who makes us unique or different from the rest we cannot compare ourselves with rest of the world, If we take artists we know that Leonardo Da Vinci from portugese makes us to say that Portugal people are great when it comes to paintings because of his one and only masterpiece THE Monalisa Painting. We can say that the people who represent us makes our nation great, if we take Mahatma Gandhi in our case he is the one who made peace protests unlike any other and contributed a lot to bringing freedom to India because many believe in him and joined him which made our countries protests unique to others and irrefutable.
There are some who refute the statement saying general welfare of the people is greatness itself, I disagree this because even if general welfare of a nation is great, we can say they have a good lifestyle, they have great people, good working population but they cannot distinguish how great they are if there were not many artists, scientists who show its fame to the whole world. The welfare can be easily achieved of the nation's leader is distinguished, influential and want to bring welfare to the country but the reverse is not possible, it is because general welfare need not always mean great rulers, scientists as they mainly comes hard background. For Example, Late Queen Elizabeth II who is influential and her existence is what increases the the value of the nation Great Britain as said by many people.
To conclude, we can say from the above reasons and conclusions we can say that the nation is great with the rulers, scientists, artists achievements mainly rather than general welfare which only makes a part of its greatness. So, greatness is achieved through people who distinguish themselves in world stage representing the nation.
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- Some people claim that you can tell whether a nation is great by looking at the achievements of its rulers artists or scientists Others argue that the surest indicator of a great nation is in fact the general welfare of all its people 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, then, for example, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 65.0 33.0505617978 197% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2714.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83778966132 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59400582687 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452762923351 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 848.7 704.065955056 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.26324685 60.3974514979 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.933333333 118.986275619 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.4 23.4991977007 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408594425432 0.243740707755 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143019462683 0.0831039109588 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121081119708 0.0758088955206 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2447539368 0.150359130593 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147681809436 0.0667264976115 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 14.1392134831 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 48.8420337079 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 100.480337079 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.7820224719 144% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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