18.06.2022: Young people are commtting more crimes. Dicuss the causes and solutions for this problem
In many countries, the influence of crime on people has been increasing day by day, especially with the committing of more young people. To the best of my knowledge, there are various reasons behind this phenomenon, and several solutions should be applied to curb it.
There are two main reasons associated with this tendency. First of all, it relates to the growth of economic pressure on youngsters when people are inequally treated in opportunities to have a good or well-paid job. For instance, the youth try to reach their aims, not by legal means but by illegal methods such as relying on relationships and bribes. Therefore, the inflation rate has increased and young people are morally degraded, dissatisfied, and prone to becoming criminals. Moreover, the lack of parental education and management makes children easily meet poorly socialized. This happened when parents pay too much attention to earning money and do not take full responsibility for caring for their kids.
To my view, the government should bear a leading role in declining crime cases among youngsters by supporting the needy and creating more equal chances for the young. Especially, banning strict regulations to prevent the spread of unlawful activities and those who are against the legal. In addition, family and schools are the most vital factor to educate their children when they are kids who easily obey our instructions. Also, they must spend more time with them and take part in crime prevention education program that helps kids more aware of the hazards of criminals.
To conclude, the rise in youth crime can be linked to factors at home and school. Nonetheless, despite these problems, there are some ways to deal with them that focus on why young people decide to commit crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, moreover, nonetheless, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1486.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08904109589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70013343846 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633561643836 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8560439344 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.142857143 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215113300563 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628456235052 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464176924416 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123400718145 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304008753167 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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