Crimes and other kinds of information on television and newspaper have adverse consequences. This kind of information to be restricted to be shown in media. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
News is, without a doubt, the most advanced method for keeping up to date on events in your area or around the world. Many, however, feel that restrictions on the publication of news based on heinous crimes should be enforced. I wholeheartedly support this viewpoint, and the following arguments shall convey my personal views on the topic presented above.
To begin with, it is obvious that crime-related news is critical for alerting people to new forms of crimes occurring in their surroundings and saving mankind. This not only aids in the detection of crimes at an early stage, but also provides safeguards to protect us from the consequences later on. For example, cybercrime is currently popular, and various media outlets are heavily focusing on it so that people are aware of it and may protect themselves from significant losses. As a result, some coverage of this issue in the news is unavoidable because it aids in the reduction of crime rates.
Criminal offences, even simulated crime scenes, should not be presented live on television or the internet, especially if they are frightening to viewers. For example, when news channels depict a serial killer who may be a neighbor or relative, it inserts a morale threat and develops trust concerns between them. Furthermore, by providing detailed descriptions of crimes rather than making them known, people offer ingenious ways to commit crimes and get rid of them. As a result, such anti-social content should not be shown on the screen in order to avoid the risk of influencing the psychology of viewers, particularly young children.
In conclusion, while news reports make it simple to acquire negative news and take precautions, news incorporating criminal themes incites societal unrest, such as public threatening. To avoid major social implications, they must be banned from being publicy and widely exhibited.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21710526316 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90819241153 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641447368421 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.022453955 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150834795493 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547445861127 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379491375036 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858782242352 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208818108153 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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