People buy a product if it fulfills their needs, there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Advertising is a critical component of today's business. Dwellers purchase items according to their need so the advertisement is of no use. I disagree with this statement to a large extent as advertisement industry creates various new employment opportunities.
To commence with, it enlighten factions about the distinct products available in the market so they can enjoy latest launch goods. To exemplify, in yester years, residents can only enjoy the products of their local market but these days the supermarkets are fully stocked with international items and brands. In addition to this, it is a necessary tool for businesses to inform their clients about their products through physical or digital meetings. Resultantly, it will enhance the productivity of the sale.
Moving further, advertising is a creative sector that employs a large number of individuals. The unemployed rate can be reduced if there will be numerous advertisements. To illustrate, the different media platforms are required for flourishing advertisement such as television, newspaper, radio, magazines and billboard where the people can easily get jobs. Eventually, residents can meet the demands of their family without any hurdle. If the advertising industry can provide job opportunities to citizens then why there is no need for advertisement?
To conclude, advertisements are well-linked to the public as they have made the life of masses more convenient and comfortable. Not only it provides plethora of jobs but also informs the customers about the new products.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enlightens'?
Suggestion: enlightens
... opportunities. To commence with, it enlighten factions about the distinct products av...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'enjoy the latest'.
Suggestion: enjoy the latest
...cts available in the market so they can enjoy latest launch goods. To exemplify, in yester y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ising is a creative sector that employs a large number of individuals. The unemployed rate can be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53361344538 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23416164835 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2030949424 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251910217546 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792928136835 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722297624731 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138191401012 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777913525334 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enlightens'?
Suggestion: enlightens
... opportunities. To commence with, it enlighten factions about the distinct products av...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'enjoy the latest'.
Suggestion: enjoy the latest
...cts available in the market so they can enjoy latest launch goods. To exemplify, in yester y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ising is a creative sector that employs a large number of individuals. The unemployed rate can be...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53361344538 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23416164835 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2030949424 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251910217546 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792928136835 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722297624731 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138191401012 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777913525334 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.