Most people think that the Internet is good, others think that its disadvantages are more important. What is your opinion? Talking about the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?
When the issue of the Internet comes into view, there exist conflicting opinions. Some people believe that humans benefit immensely from the Internet, while others hold the claim that it is negatively harmful to society. This essay aims at discussing both sides before representing my perspective on this matter.
On the one hand, there are a great number of advantages to using the Internet. It gives people instant access to information on almost any subject. To be more specific, instead of spending hours looking for information in books or newspapers, humans can now have the answers to any questions in a few seconds provided that the Internet is available. Moreover, the Internet brings convenience to human beings. In other words, there are a variety of shops and other services such as education and even medical, which are now available online. Customers can stay at home and order different kinds of goods, ranging from clothing items to food and drinks. Meanwhile, students are able to register for online courses in different areas and overseas, and at the same time, patients can book an appointment with their doctors online in advance. Take the Covid-19 pandemic as an illustration of the pros of the Internet. Thanks to the Internet, while people have to stay at home to prevent Coronavirus, they can still do most of their daily activities such as shopping, studying and medical care checking online. What can be inferred from this is that the Internet is beneficial to human beings.
On the other hand, although the Internet has certain advantages, its disadvantages should not be ignored. Firstly, the Internet contains offensive content. Specifically, there are many websites that demonstrate violent and sexual images; consequently, these websites may encourage social evils such as sexual harassment and organized crime. Furthermore, the Internet is currently hard to control. Many parents find it difficult to supervise what their children see online and they do not always know whom their children are chatting. As a consequence, this has resulted in many cases of phishing and fraud relating to children. Reportedly, a study in a province in China has recorded that the rate of children being kidnapped through their online friends has tripled since the advent of the Internet. This directly suggests that the Internet is detrimental to small children unless they are under their parents’ scrutiny.
In conclusion, even though the Internet has a wide range of positive perks, its downsides should also be kept in mind. From my point of view, the Internet is one of the greatest inventions of mankind’s history due to its convenience and marvelous appliances. In terms of its cons, governments and authorities should join hands to not only minimize and pass laws on darks websites, but they should raise the awareness of their residents as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, still, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in many cases, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2412.0 1615.20841683 149% => OK
No of words: 466.0 315.596192385 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17596566524 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77929389797 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55364806867 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7766560963 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220432116401 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663932055427 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520740404729 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1236327356 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232586792416 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 78.4519038076 166% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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