The charts show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car.
The two pie charts compare the figures of different reasons why people commute to work by bicycle or by car.
In general, it is apparent that the percentage of people cycling to work for maintaining health and protecting the environment is the highest, while the figure for citizens commuting to work by car for being comfortable makes up the biggest pie among factors.
Looking at reasons for riding a bicycle to work, it is noticeable that the proportion of the community that chooses the unpolluted vehicle for staying healthy and reducing pollution is the same at 30%, which becomes the most dominant factor. While the percentage of workers cycling to work due to no parking problems is half of that. In addition, 13% of people cycle to work because it is free, just 1% higher than the faster than driving reason.
In contrast to this, the percentage who prefer driving to work by car because it is more comfortable and relaxed is 40%, making it become the majority element. This figure has also doubled the reason for travelling over a long distance to work. Meanwhile, there is a similar ratio between faster than driving to work and carrying things to work conveniently, accounting for 14%. Making up just more than a tenth belongs to feeling safe and secure during the journey to work.
- People in the community can buy cheaper products nowadays Do advantages outweigh disadvantages 56
- Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema Others feel that violent films should be not released Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products such as medicines and clothing Do you agree or disagree 89
- Topic It is the responsibility of schools to teach children good behavior in addition to providing formal education To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- The charts give information about two genres of TV programmes watched by men and women and four different age groups in Australia 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...which becomes the most dominant factor. While the percentage of workers cycling to wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, in addition, in contrast, in general, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85201793722 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5754046836 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556053811659 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5433200836 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7777777778 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.77777777778 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331592179818 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147316947255 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126466904361 0.0843802449381 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241571778392 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14309868352 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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