Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
There is a general believe that more the advancement and development occurs in future more easier will be the people's life. Some people may agree with statement that life was more comfortable in the past, whereas some may agree with that it is far better now than it used to be. In my personal opinion, I agree to the given prompt, and will corroborate that life today is much easier than it used to be in past. I feel this way for three specific reasons which i would examine in this essay.
First of all, Life today is much more filled with facilities and technology. Such advance technology in our daily life had made our problems to be too tiny. Today, From morning to evening we do all our works through our devices and technology. It is obvious that if our grandparents have such equipment they would have live the similar life as ours. In contrast, today we do our daily task with an ease :such as travelling with in few hours, financing within few minutes, which was a demanding task when our grandsire used to be children. For example: My grandparents have to walk for around 3 hours through jungle to reach to market and buy goods for the home. But now, I goes to market in my bike within few minutes. So, He always tells me to respect the life that i am having today as he was deprived of it when he was a child. Consequently, Advancement had made our life more comfy.
Secondly, today the whole world are in favor of peace and democracy. There are not any tyrannical ruler as they used to be before. Consequently, we are having the life full of tranquility and liberty. However, This was not the case when our grandparents were children. Different wars and fights for independence wa prevalent at that time which made our grandparent life full of trouble. This can be exemplified by story of my grandfather. He was an warrior in Gurkha Regiment during world war. He and his freinds were sent to The Great Britain to fight against the USSR. And they had not gone on their wish but it was compulsion in the country to serve for nation. So, despite loving the peace he was forced to fight. So, Such environment during our grandparents period withheld their freedom and comfortable life from them.
Finally, Today the whole population have greater literacy than it was to be. To be literate was a dream of our grandparents, as they were not allowed to go to school, instead they have to do the household work. So, such depravity of education and schools affected on their mental astuteness and logistics. Our grandparents were not able to analyse the thing logically as we are now. This was mainly due to dearth of formal education. Had they would have been provided with proper education, they would not have to life such un-comfy life. For instance: My friends grandmother was not educated and was confined on home. But my grandmother was educated, was a PhD in data science so, she explored the whole world and worked with the many perplexing data of world.
In conclusion, the congestive lifestyle, dearth advancement and depravity of education was the major reason why our grandparents life was so troublesome. However, We are facilitate with all of those things so we are living more comfortable life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...cement and development occurs in future more easier will be the peoples life. Some people m...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...ccurs in future more easier will be the peoples life. Some people may agree with statem...
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Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...ar better now than it used to be. In my personal opinion, I agree to the given prompt, and will ...
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Line 1, column 404, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...today is much easier than it used to be in past. I feel this way for three specific rea...
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Line 1, column 462, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...is way for three specific reasons which i would examine in this essay. First o...
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Line 3, column 674, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
... and buy goods for the home. But now, I goes to market in my bike within few minutes...
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Line 3, column 768, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lways tells me to respect the life that i am having today as he was deprived of i...
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Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...fied by story of my grandfather. He was an warrior in Gurkha Regiment during world...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'facilitated'.
Suggestion: facilitated
...ife was so troublesome. However, We are facilitate with all of those things so we are livi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, as for, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 42.0 15.1003584229 278% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2660.0 1977.66487455 135% => OK
No of words: 570.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64379387338 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 263.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461403508772 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 838.8 618.680645161 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9820327043 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2352941176 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38235294118 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261087836439 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714623006753 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505664890513 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169161519118 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328054250313 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 86.8835125448 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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