“A nation should require all its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college rather than allow schools in different parts of the nation to determine which academic courses to offer.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Students are a nation's greatest asset as said by many prominent people and great world leaders. So it is important they get the best and quality education. The prompt suggests that students should study the same national curriculum until they enter college. I mostly disagree with this prompt for the following two reasons.
Firstly, students should be allowed various curriculums so that they know their interests and passions are. Restricting them to a particular curriculum may inhibit their growth in a particular field. For instance if a particular student may be good at historical analysis and he is not taught anything related to that subject in the years before he enters college he may find it difficult to understand especially if he is going to a foreign university where students already studied about this in school. Like how many great scholars said if you put a fish in a test of flying instead of swimming it is destined to fail.
Secondly , Students from certain regions may speak different dilects and languages. So restraining them into a national uniform curriculum may make them loose touch to their language and culture. For instance in India there are more than 1600 languages and dilects so if the government puts a national curiculum students will not be able to learn their regional language. That is why in India there is the option of the regional curriculum as well. So students with particular interest in their culture and language may not be enthusiastic about their curriculum.
However, the upside to having a common curriculum for all students across the country is that they will not miss out on anything that other students in the country studied in their schools. Hence making it easy for colleges to make their curriculum as they would not have to teach the basics to every student for every subject that they may provide. It also makes it easy for students to apply to varipous colleges across the country.
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to the statement mentioned. Students should be allowed to follow their interest and passion so that they can properly nurture and grow their interests and skills. They should also be provided with the opportunity to keep in touch with their roots and culture in the primary and secondary educatiuon. However a certain uniformity in curriculum is also required in order for the smooth functioning of the education system in the country which will also be beneficial to the students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
Students are a nations greatest asset as said by many prominen...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'nations the greatest'.
Suggestion: nations the greatest
Students are a nations greatest asset as said by many prominent people ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...culums so that they know their interests and passions are. Restricting them to a ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ming it is destined to fail. Secondly , Students from certain regions may spea...
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Suggestion:
...ng it is destined to fail. Secondly , Students from certain regions may speak ...
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Suggestion:
...culture. For instance in India there are more than 1600 languages and dilects so ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a national curiculum students will not be able to learn their regional language...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...n the country studied in their schools. Hence making it easy for colleges to make the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...n the primary and secondary educatiuon. However a certain uniformity in curriculum is a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 414.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99758454106 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64931622683 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487922705314 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5176078758 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.45 118.986275619 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225235820763 0.243740707755 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07418002963 0.0831039109588 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741674508228 0.0758088955206 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134460971705 0.150359130593 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049931171443 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.