The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years

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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The given pie chart illustrates the percentage who graduated from one university categorised while the given table categorised in three types of employment.

Overall, it is readily apparent that the majority of anthropologist became full-time work after their graduation. It is also worth pointing out that after five years' work of three types employment earn more than 100.000 dollars.

A quick glance at the pie chart reveals that the proportion of anthropologist who full time postgrad study and not known have a similar number ( 8% ). Moreover, these people working part time and postgrad study recorded at the lowest figure (5%) while there are more than a half percentage people choose full-time work. In addition, other anthropologist make up around 30% of unemployed and part- time work.

Turning to the table, after five years' work the percentages of salaries in three types of employment except for private companies are share 5% from 25.000 to 49.000 dollars , follow by these figures are still share 15% in from 50.000 to 74.999 dollars. Although, the proportion of salaries of employees' freelance consultants is 40% for more than 75.000 dollars so this figure for the government sector increases gradually from 30% for 75.000 to 99.999 dollars to 50% for more than 100.000 dollars. On the other type of employment, there are respectively 10% (25.000 to 49.999 dollars), 35% ( 50.000 to 74.999 dollars), 25% ( 75.000 to 99.999 dollars) and 30% ( more than 100.000 dollars).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...at the proportion of anthropologist who full time postgrad study and not known have a sim...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudy and not known have a similar number 8% . Moreover, these people working part...
^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and not known have a similar number 8% . Moreover, these people working part tim...
^^
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...er 8% . Moreover, these people working part time and postgrad study recorded at the lowe...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her anthropologist make up around 30% of unemployed and part- time work. Turni...
^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e share 5% from 25.000 to 49.000 dollars , follow by these figures are still share...
^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shared'.
Suggestion: shared
...ars , follow by these figures are still share 15% in from 50.000 to 74.999 dollars. A...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tively 10% 25.000 to 49.999 dollars, 35% 50.000 to 74.999 dollars, 25% 75.000 to...
^^
Line 7, column 619, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lars, 35% 50.000 to 74.999 dollars, 25% 75.000 to 99.999 dollars and 30% more t...
^^
Line 7, column 653, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, 25% 75.000 to 99.999 dollars and 30% more than 100.000 dollars.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, still, while, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73706236989 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3856225154 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15160468259 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820014348341 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558463009672 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116830072918 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573065403712 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 83, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...at the proportion of anthropologist who full time postgrad study and not known have a sim...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tudy and not known have a similar number 8% . Moreover, these people working part...
^^
Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... and not known have a similar number 8% . Moreover, these people working part tim...
^^
Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...er 8% . Moreover, these people working part time and postgrad study recorded at the lowe...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her anthropologist make up around 30% of unemployed and part- time work. Turni...
^^
Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e share 5% from 25.000 to 49.000 dollars , follow by these figures are still share...
^^
Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'shared'.
Suggestion: shared
...ars , follow by these figures are still share 15% in from 50.000 to 74.999 dollars. A...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 588, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tively 10% 25.000 to 49.999 dollars, 35% 50.000 to 74.999 dollars, 25% 75.000 to...
^^
Line 7, column 619, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lars, 35% 50.000 to 74.999 dollars, 25% 75.000 to 99.999 dollars and 30% more t...
^^
Line 7, column 653, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s, 25% 75.000 to 99.999 dollars and 30% more than 100.000 dollars.
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, so, still, while, except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20588235294 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73706236989 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542016806723 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3856225154 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.666666667 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15160468259 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820014348341 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558463009672 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116830072918 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573065403712 0.0819641961636 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.