The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given process illustrates the procedure for gathering rainwater and changing it into palatable water.
Overall, there are a few steps in total, beginning with the rainwater collection and finishing with the treated fresh water.
At the start of the process, the rain drops are contained in the gutters which are fixed to the house roof. The water then goes down to the drainage tube linked to a network of many pipes lying underground. Next the water flows through a device called water filter to be cleaned and led to a large contained named storage chamber where it is kept for further purifying process.
Following this, the water goes to another big tank for chemical treatment. This is the place where the cleaning agents from above are put into the tank and well mixed with the water, turning it into the drinkable one. Eventually, the finished water is pumped via the remaining pipes to the households, ready for consumption.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the households, ready for consumption.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93710691824 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50218052922 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4897708248 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.125 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150216437999 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654426455077 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340033254719 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945007918066 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107124139719 0.0819641961636 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the households, ready for consumption.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments