The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901

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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901

The data representates the amount of workers and factories in England and Wales since 1851 until 1901. It is measured in thousand persons and hundred units. Overall, it showed a decline the number of workers which involves females and males throughout the year while the total of mills rose significantly in the middle of the year and then decreased dramatically in the next year.
According to the result in 1851 to 1881, there has occurred the increase of factories number exactly 496 from 225 to 721 but it was followed by dropped need of employees specifically 477.100 in the initial year to only 126.132 with details the data of females and males changed consecutively at 150.000 and 200.938 in the last fifty years.
Then in 1891 to 1901, the number of mills fell steadily as much as 121 units and on the same line with the toiler who had decreased in both of genders and it caused the reduction of total laborers indeed 44.000 in the last ten years.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 122, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ince 1851 until 1901. It is measured in thousand persons and hundred units. Overall, it ...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a hundred'.
Suggestion: a hundred
... It is measured in thousand persons and hundred units. Overall, it showed a decline the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68639053254 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52373627274 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597633136095 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.638575354 43.030603864 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.4 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8 22.9334400587 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.23603664747 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20608281027 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105204094517 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106483473705 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120505947347 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043387426505 0.0819641961636 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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