In some cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?
Currently, traffic has enormously increased in urban areas of many countries across the globe. The prime reason is the rising demand for transportation and jobs in the suburbs. However, I believe this problem/issue can be solved by some actions from the authorities.
To begin with, the two main/primary/root causes of this issue are due to the higher/increasing usage of private vehicles and the migration of job-seekers from the countryside. Firstly, most road users prefer using their own vehicles to using public transit. For one thing, since public transport is not well inadequate, it makes passengers feel uncomfortable and unsafe when travelling. For another thing, using private vehicles is a more time-saving choice because people/commuters do not have to waste their time for buying tickets and waiting for the buses or trains. Secondly, the lack of jobs in the suburbs is encouraging job-seekers to migrate to towns or cities to find work, leading to a much higher number of traffic participants.
Several effective measures can be implemented/adopted/imposed to solve the issues. The system of public transportation should be upgraded and improved to attract more passengers and dissuade them from using their personal vehicles too often. In addition, more jobs for residents in the suburban and rural areas should be created to prevent the movement of people to metropolises where heavy traffic is a serious problem.
In conclusion, the rising number of private vehicles and the shortage of jobs are the two culprits of traffic problems. To eliminate this situation, appropriate actions on public transportation and job shortage in the countryside should have to be considered.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, for another thing, for one thing, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45075757576 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42740660658 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9446580487 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171590005691 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068044805275 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892703822233 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123184264181 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609911206188 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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