Nowadays, in many families both parents need to have jobs. What are some of the problems associated with both parents working, and what are some of the possible solutions?
Today, both parents working has become common in many countries around the world. They may share the financial burden, but there are other issues that are more worrisome. In this article, I will highlight the problems they may face and provide some solutions to the problems raised.
I think, some of the problems that can be mentioned when both parents go to work is that they will not have much time to spend with their children. Children who lack parental attention may neglect their studies, learn bad habits that parents will not notice. They also cannot recognize the psychological changes when the children are in the developmental age. The second problem, when they spend all their time at work, they will have to pay an extra fee for a maid or nanny to take care of their children. And choosing a babysitter is not easy.
However, every problem has a solution. The simplest solution is for them to organize their work time and spend more time with their children. Specifically, parents have to get up earlier to eat breakfast with the children, take them to school. After school, pick them up, give them snacks,... On weekends, instead of overtime, let them go to the park, go to the supermarket or visit grandparents.. For families with children who have not had children yet. When they reach school age, they can ask their grandparents to take care of them while they work and pick them up after work. In my opinion, this is the simplest solution, but not necessarily the easiest. The main thing is in the parents.
The balance between work and taking care of family and children is not an easy thing for parents. However, try to spend more time taking care of and growing up with the kids
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, while, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72575250836 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45165786344 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501672240803 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2252448826 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3684210526 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7368421053 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.68421052632 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202560902499 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668225299778 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774607146445 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136847621803 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612090660849 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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