you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country
Dear Sir / Madam
My Name Muhammad Abdurrohman
Iam Your Employee at Amsterdam Office
I writing this letter to give you information about my desire in this office
Actually, recently I got information about upgrading skill and leadership training which is made at head office for six month, I think that so important for me to upgrade my skill and knowledge about leadersip because in here I lead a lot of people in my team, then after I finished the job as head office for six months I believe I can increase income our company be faster with my experience at head office and I decided for join and submit for this opportunity. before I moved to head office I have coordination with other staff and manager in my office for handle my work in here until I back here, I believe my job in here will be finish before my course finished because I have little task again here. Hopefully you can arranging and aproving my purpose, because I want our company be better with this opportunity and average branch office can get big income in the future.
Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon
Your faithfully
Muhammad abdurrohman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 29, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir / Madam My Name Muhammad Abdurrohman Iam Your Employee at Amsterdam Office I...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... Iam Your Employee at Amsterdam Office I writing this letter to give you informa...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...ng which is made at head office for six month, I think that so important for me to up...
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Line 5, column 466, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Before
...r join and submit for this opportunity. before I moved to head office I have coordinat...
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Line 5, column 643, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I believe my job in here will be finish before my course finished because I have...
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Line 5, column 728, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'arrange'
Suggestion: arrange
...ttle task again here. Hopefully you can arranging and aproving my purpose, because I want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67788461538 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5544056023 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 16.3608247423 318% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.693515168 44.8134815571 446% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 243.25 76.5299724578 318% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.0 16.8248392259 309% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202281711803 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105099943352 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568244582376 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064974595359 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685706162109 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 8.37731958763 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 18.7 70.7449484536 26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 23.6 7.45979381443 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 8.54432989691 267% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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