It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to
university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

This is tendency to get a year space in between the school and university. I strongly believe there are more benefits then demerits. However, The gap between after higher studies and university help to mind concentration for university.

To commence with, To take a gap between higher study and university for better study help such as to start a fresh university life and helps them to socialise with other students. Firstly this will give more benefits and more time to prepare for their university entrance exam. For instance taking a gap between of year help to get a good score and admission in better university.

Additionally, before I mentioned earlier there are various disadvantages of taking a gap for year because of university. Firstly, folks takes a whole year of gap for the preparation of entrance exam instead of students must prepare for their exam in their 12th grade. Secondly a whole year is easy to distract a student from their goal.

To conclude with, I find more advantages than the demerits of taking a gap year for university. However student must have to decide by themselves for taking a gap or not.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for instance, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9170984456 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74918197962 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512953367876 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3888796171 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2727272727 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152012976361 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073721571621 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553575905086 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10714323217 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391576477475 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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