There is less communication in between family member today than in the past do you agree or disagree.
In the today's era, communication becomes hard among family members compared to previous era. I strongly agree with the opinion and also I think new generation not interested in maintaining relationship with in the family member. Therefor communication between family member reduce.
To begin with, family members don't attentive in maintaining relationship among
family members because lack of communication in between them it become
difficult to talk to each other. Secondly, jealousy between the family member is
also a reason to less communication between family members. For instance
someone from the family member buy a new car other family member start
enviousness from. him. Jealousy leads to foe from one family member to another
family member. However enviousness is not the only thing that hurdles among
the family members.
Additionally, like I mentioned earlier enviousness is not the only problem which
leads to foe among the family members. Moreover, there are many things
because of that family member not interested talk to each other. However, the
lack of communication among the family is because of their internal matter such
as property disputes. Furthermore, not equally distributed property by their
parents relationship become fragile among the family members. However.
communication among the family members help to share happiness with each
other. Young generation are not much interested to talk with their relatives and
this is also one of the reason communication is tough between family members.
To conclude with, communication with anyone help to relive stress and
depression in the human body, Lack of communication in between family or with
anyone which cause depression and stress and also people take wrong decision
in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 8, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
In the todays era, communication becomes hard among f...
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Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...educe. To begin with, family members dont attentive in maintaining relationship a...
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Line 4, column 65, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ack of communication in between them it become difficult to talk to each other. Secon...
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Line 8, column 19, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Him
... family member start enviousness from. him. Jealousy leads to foe from one family ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...amily member to another family member. However enviousness is not the only thing that ...
^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 63, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ecome fragile among the family members. However. communication among the family member...
^^^^^^^
Line 18, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Communication
...ile among the family members. However. communication among the family members help to share ...
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Line 22, column 45, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'helps'.
Suggestion: helps
...onclude with, communication with anyone help to relive stress and depression in the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60583941606 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84975506807 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445255474453 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1731042443 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317958206403 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150353337406 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0892506760437 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118924875337 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887414439286 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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