Dear Sir,
I hope your day is going great. I'm writing this letter to inform you about organizing a dinner party at your restaurant. This is a gathering for my extended family members and it's going to commence by 7pm next week Friday.
First, the reason I would be giving this party is to ensure that the kids get to know their cousins, uncles, aunts and grand parents. According to my mom, this dinner party is a good development and signifies a long awaited get together for the whole family to eat, meet and talk. It's definitely going to be awesome!
In addition to things mentioned earlier, my wife prefers that the dinner should be a buffet. Can you remember the appetizer I had at your restaurant the last time? We'd need to have that before our main meal. Also, make arrangements for a crate of neither Budweiser nor Tiger beer for us. The kids need soft drinks too, so they won't be left out. It's expedient that needs everyone is carried along; it's a great accomplishment.
Lastly, I would like to know whether we are going to stay in the general or private section of your outfit? Plans have been made but we can make adjustments.
I hope to hear from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 33, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Sir, I hope your day is going great. Im writing this letter to inform you about...
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Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: IT_IS[19]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ring for my extended family members and its going to commence by 7pm next week Frid...
^^^
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...the whole family to eat, meet and talk. Its definitely going to be awesome! In ...
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Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: WED_WE_D[1]
Message: Did you mean 'we'd'?
Suggestion: We'd
...I had at your restaurant the last time? Wed need to have that before our main meal....
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...t that needs everyone is carried along; its a great accomplishment. Lastly, I wo...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59545454545 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46500716644 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9701110492 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.4 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144279565293 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045080492903 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056284607902 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768004912561 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401068411848 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.