Some people think that more money should be spent on protecting endangered species while others think it is a waste of valuable money. What is your opinion?
Many governments throughout the world are working to save endangered species of animals while many individuals consider that it is completely useless and a waste of budget. In my opinion, these near-extinct animals must be protected. Due to the impacts that their disappearance will have on entire wildlife and their crucial role in ecosystems.
The first reason is that the continuous energy cycle in the forest is really necessary. Elimination of some species may, in fact, disturb the food chain. Furthermore, if this process is incomplete or continuous, it might pose a serious hazard to other living species. In the wild, for instance, tigers are carnivores, the creatures that depend on other groups for existence, it also means killing other animals to acquire their own food. There would be a disruption in the food chain if tigers go extinct.
Another argument is that the loss of these species can be a major loss to the ecosystem's biodiversity. There are different agencies and organizations in several nations in the world dedicated to the conservation of rare species in order to keep them from extinction. In Australia, for example, there are various national parks and wildlife sanctuaries whose sole aim is to care for these species and are directly supported by the parliament. As a result, it is imperative to protect and preserve endangered species.
The preservation of endangered species necessitates enormous financial resources. It is a worthwhile investment, nevertheless, as it greatly preserves ecological richness while protecting forest life from disappearing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ecosystems'' or 'ecosystem's'?
Suggestion: ecosystems'; ecosystem's
...hese species can be a major loss to the ecosystems biodiversity. There are different agenc...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...otecting forest life from disappearing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, really, so, while, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12308565364 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4201961978 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4285714286 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161407873497 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518162654002 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323620827909 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907931661043 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00970722864148 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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