Nowadays people tend to have children at an older age. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages.
In this modern era, postponing to birth a child in the older age is the main consideration of the communities. I consent to be more advantageous side which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, perhaps, to have an infant is the right decision for people in the older age which could lead to have a well-prepared financial independence. In the fact, numerous of divorce occasions inflicting the financial problem especially for spouse who have a child in the early age. Subsequently, this could not only bring on the inharmonic family but also prodigious of children future. Furthermore,
Readiness of Parenting ability which probably shapes the children’s personality is the second one’s. this is essential part of children development for leading to their future. To illustrate, if children obtain inappropriate approach including lack of attention, children could be influenced of their bad circumstance such as free sex.
On the flip side, in my point of view, the fertility problem especially for women is the main disadvantages for this issue. The older women, the higher avenue to decrease their ability to produce a child. Consequently, they would face with the mental issue such as blaming themselves because of unable to bear descendant. In addition, the age gap between parents and children would influence for how the way parents treat their children. Regarding to the differences of the era, both have a different situation that might generate improper approach such as what their children need in the children’s era is not match with the parents know in parent’s era.
To sum up, while bearing child in an older age is the main consideration of the people might inflict several demerits to some extent. the well-prepared financial family and the knowledgeable of parents in terms of parenting appears to me its merits.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...digious of children future. Furthermore, Readiness of Parenting ability which pro...
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Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...dren’s personality is the second one’s. this is essential part of children developme...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...nflict several demerits to some extent. the well-prepared financial family and the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, well, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19536423841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06355819248 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5189159093 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245130761655 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802086997822 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540949759888 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136440491414 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405074916971 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...digious of children future. Furthermore, Readiness of Parenting ability which pro...
^^^
Line 3, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...dren’s personality is the second one’s. this is essential part of children developme...
^^^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...nflict several demerits to some extent. the well-prepared financial family and the ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, regarding, second, so, well, while, in addition, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1569.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19536423841 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06355819248 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5189159093 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.6 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245130761655 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802086997822 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540949759888 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136440491414 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405074916971 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.