Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They just have sent you some holiday photographs
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
*Thank them for the holiday and the photos
*Explain why you didn't write to them earlier
*Invite them to come and stay with you
Dear Peter,
Hope you are doing well. We had a great vacation with you guys. Thanks for making the holidays more memorable and of course for the photographs that you have sent me yesterday.
Ireland is indeed a spectacular country to travel at least once in a lifetime. I really surprised to see the landscapes, wildlife, and culture. Although the trip is finished, I can't get out of the memories. Moreover, I never forget the time we spent in your home along with your family.
As I was not feeling well, I didn't pen you right after my journey. I was suffering from covid 19 and was quarantined for two weeks. It took several days for me to become a normal person and I am perfectly alright now.
I would like to invite all of you to visit my home in London this month during your Christmas holidays. You know that London is a must-visit place in the time of Christmas. This place is not only famous for shopping malls but also for ancient churches. We feel delighted if you come and celebrate the festival with us for the whole week.
I would love to see you with your family soon. Take care and write back.
Warm Regards,
Samuel
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lture. Although the trip is finished, I cant get out of the memories. Moreover, I ne...
^^^^
Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...amily. As I was not feeling well, I didnt pen you right after my journey. I was s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, at least, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51196172249 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40971682855 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650717703349 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7384938827 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.4705882353 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2941176471 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302010881773 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832737472598 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737398718978 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165822696463 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998100693339 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...lture. Although the trip is finished, I cant get out of the memories. Moreover, I ne...
^^^^
Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...amily. As I was not feeling well, I didnt pen you right after my journey. I was s...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, really, so, well, at least, of course, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51196172249 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40971682855 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650717703349 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7384938827 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.4705882353 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.2941176471 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302010881773 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832737472598 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737398718978 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165822696463 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0998100693339 0.0580467560999 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.99 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.