More and more people today are choosing to eat only healthy food and are making time to exercise regularly. Why is this? What can be done to encourage other people to eat only healthy food and to make time to exercise regularly?
It is obvious that many people today are adopting an eating healthy diets and spending more time on exercise. While this tendency can result from several factors, more measures can be also employed to encourage others to follow suit.
The growing trend for a healthy lifestyle is primarily attributed to the development of education. In terms of food consumption, recently, educational institutions have widely provided their students with healthy dishes, and may even offer vegetarian and vegan diets. Furthermore, the involvements of electronic media and reputable magazines also play a crucial role in raising health awareness among youngsters. From the perspective of exercise, several advertising campaigns have also made people be wary of sedentary lifestyles and motivated them to keep fit via different approaches. Even elderly people are also encouraged to have more gentle exercise, including brisk walking or swimming.
Nonetheless, it is still necessary to impulsively promote healthy eating and regular exercise among people. Firstly, national and local authorities should allocate more resources to stimulate healthy lifestyles through different advertising campaigns for individuals of all ages. The government should also provide funding for the construction of free-access exercise facilities such as stadiums or gyms with more affordable services that encourage the residents to work out and keep fit. Secondly, educational institutions should be also responsible for the student’s diet, imparting knowledge related to food or health science to make them conscious of the paramount importance of a healthy lifestyle. Finally, parental involvement also plays a crucial role in creating self-awareness of healthy lifestyles for children during their formative years.
In conclusion, education is one of the most fundamental factors for the encouragement of frequent exercise and a healthy diet. More campaigns should be also conducted to promote these lifestyles among people.
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- Task 1 The chart shows the percentage of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 to 2010
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.84931506849 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06590828015 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595890410959 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8916900968 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289824554662 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100282535486 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705259339001 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189189884674 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745382660809 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.65 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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