Some people think that there should be two months of quarantine per year when people work from home in order to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is noticeable that air quality is now recovering within the global quarantine of a novel influenza- Corona virus as an example. Some espousal of other repeating situations may argue that it is as a potential way to reduce polluted emission sources. For my part, I still gravitate towards some other feasible solution besides just shutting all industrial activities or transportation down.
The undesirable aforementioned quarantines can be seen as a positive way of enhancing air quality. Firstly, people are prevented from commuting for a span of months so that it is a dramatic drop off carbon dioxide or NO2 released from enormous transporting vehicles around the world. The recent transferring working habits may lead to a good precedent for the future that people are able to work from home instead of going to the office. Belonging to some experts, isolation is a proper period for the earth to self-recovering. For instance, Ozone hole can make a fixing when human activities have a sign of abating.
There are, however, some irrefutable complications that can easily overshadow the potential benefits. It is true that air pollution not all stem from man-made activities that some nature source of volcanoes or wildfires as well are also contributed to these circumstances. Hence, temporary closure of using energy production cannot totally make up for all problem. Furthermore, it needs to be a more intense policy related to emission standards and other advocates for clean engine for better air quality.
To conclude, I believe that isolation should not be single out as a forcibly solution for these harmful substances into the Earth’s atmosphere due to other debilitating effects belonging to nature ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('forcibly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('solution') instead of another adjective.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, may, so, still, well, for instance, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27536231884 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04742670032 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626811594203 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8059038228 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207371920556 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672324628677 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413620549135 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115461383666 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351869227452 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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