Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss views and give your own opinion.
It is believed by many people that certain professionals should not be restricted to devote their capability in another nation, while others state that they should be obliged to the country they used to be trained. This issue will cite both perspectives which will be elaborated in the forthcoming paragraph.
To begin with, proponents of giving specialists freedom to work in any country contend that the low health rate in the country they took training might be prominent factor. Apparently, a skilled employee might avoid high health risk during their productive age, therefore, the chances of work promotion is higher consideration. Furthermore, choosing a country which offers high salary could enhance a better life quality. To illustrate, German becomes favourite country for engineers to look for job since there are many multi-national companies, that offer reasonable payment along with work-life balance.
On the other hand, opponents of this view point out that the doctor has experienced to deal with the health problems of the nation they trained. In fact, mostly people in developing countries are facing health crisis such as severe skin and organ diseases. Consequently, leaving such country with this misebrable condition can induce a degredation of country progress. In addition, it is one of the scholar’s duties to participate on advancing a whole nation. If the engineer’s professional ability is applied to create machine for agricultural and industrial sectors they will probably contribute on greater economic growth.
To conclude, it seems to me that the dedication to a country which facilitates the medical or engineering students bring several benefits; elevating well-being life and modernising technological development of a nation. This is provided that the country provides promising career and salary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56028368794 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02613401024 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63829787234 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0524068894 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6923076923 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372094289275 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111297992092 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111113299466 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21216792639 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969360899311 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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