Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on the specific points made in the reading passage
The reading and lecture are both about the new advertisement tactic which is called buzzing. It states that buzzers promote their products with the they meet and know without disclosing they are being paid for it. It also tell that this has created a lot of controversy but the lecturer disagrees. He mentions that this has become even more interesting in marketing and attacks each of the claim made in the article.
In the reading, the author begins by stating that consumer have the right know the truth otherwise they can get incorrect information which can mislead them. The lecturer believes there are flaws in the writers position. He contends that company only hire the people who think their products are authentic. Thus, there is no chance of dillusing the customers.
According to the writer, consumer listen less to the buzzers so they tend to accept whatever the things they tells them. The speaker on other hand points out that consumer ask a lot of question regarding the product as well buzzer such as price and quality of product, how long they have been working there and so on. If they fails to answer then consumer won’t buy the product.
Also, the reading passage notes that when they came to know truth about the buzzling product, it will destroy the social relationship. The professor rebuts this argument. He puts forth the idea that if the product would that bad then company would not recruite buzzer. In addition, once they try to use buzzed product then they end up being trustful and open to people.
As we can see, the author and the speaker hold very different views on buzzers. The lecturer effectively challenges the writer’s argument.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'they'?
Suggestion: the; they
...hat buzzers promote their products with the they meet and know without disclosing they a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 223, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tells'?
Suggestion: tells
...ing they are being paid for it. It also tell that this has created a lot of controve...
^^^^
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'right now'?
Suggestion: right now
...egins by stating that consumer have the right know the truth otherwise they can get incor...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 89, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t consumer have the right know the truth otherwise they can get incorrect informa...
^^
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sten less to the buzzers so they tend to accept whatever the things they tells th...
^^
Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'tell'
Suggestion: tell
...end to accept whatever the things they tells them. The speaker on other hand points ...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they have been working there and so on. If they fails to answer then consumer won’...
^^
Line 3, column 327, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'fail'
Suggestion: fail
...e been working there and so on. If they fails to answer then consumer won’t buy the p...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, thus, well, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1373.03311258 101% => OK
No of words: 286.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87062937063 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39264331675 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 145.348785872 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7207379617 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9411764706 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06452816374 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170545666326 0.272083759551 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046493765415 0.0996497079465 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354983987068 0.0662205650399 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824849531855 0.162205337803 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438995932289 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 53.8541721854 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.2367328918 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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