Many people believe that it is very important to make large amount of money while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Analyze each viewpoint and take stand. Give specific reason for your position.
No one can deny the fact that we human being are never satisfying in nature. We always need more need more and more than we we have. In the given scenario, it is said that whether it is crucial to earn more money or to be satisfied with the amount that we have. Meanwhile, I am of the opinion that we should live our life happily and happiness does not comes with money. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the subsequent paragraphs.
To start with, life is meant to be live in a comfortable way and we do not have to have a lot of money for it. To be more precise, small poor family but a happy ones are far better than the big rich family but the unhappy ones. For instance, In my neighbourhood there is a family of just a two people that is husband and wife. They are not wealthy of money but of heart.Although, they are deprived of money themselves they are always behind in social works to help needy people. They are one of the inspiring people of our society. By this, I came to the realization that money does play a vital role in people’s happiness. In addition, we just require to have a good heart
Next, since we are never satisfying creature we will always be unhappy of the things we have. The habit of always wanting more led us to a sad life. To cite an example, there is another neighbour in my family which is also a family of two, husband and wife. They are very rich but very mean. They don’t even participate in community programs, do not aspire to assit the needy ones and so one. Their only concern of life is how to earn more money and become affluent more than they are today. They even quarrel sometimes and blame each other on the topic of money. Sometimes, I wonder what would they do with this sum, if they die very soon beacuse our life is full of uncertainties. Similarly, no one knows what the future holds. Therefore, by this is clear that it is not the money that brings happiness but the satisfying heart.
All things considered, indeed we need to earn money to fullfill our basic necessity but it should not be at the expense of our life. We have got only one life and we should live our life to the fullest without any grudges and selfishness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e can deny the fact that we human being are never satisfying in nature. We always need more need mo...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'need more'.
Suggestion: need more
... never satisfying in nature. We always need more need more and more than we we have. In the given ...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: we
...lways need more need more and more than we we have. In the given scenario, it is said...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'come'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: come
...our life happily and happiness does not comes with money. I feel this way for several...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...our life happily and happiness does not comes with money. I feel this way for several...
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Line 2, column 41, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a comfortable way" with adverb for "comfortable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...To start with, life is meant to be live in a comfortable way and we do not have to have a lot of mon...
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Line 2, column 161, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'one'?
Suggestion: one
... precise, small poor family but a happy ones are far better than the big rich family...
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Suggestion: Although
...y are not wealthy of money but of heart.Although, they are deprived of money themselves ...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y are not wealthy of money but of heart.Although, they are deprived of money themselves ...
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Line 2, column 674, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on, we just require to have a good heart Next, since we are never satisfying crea...
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Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e to have a good heart Next, since we are never satisfying creature we will always be unhappy of t...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: AND_SO_ONE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'and so on' (="etc.")?
Suggestion: and so on
..., do not aspire to assit the needy ones and so one. Their only concern of life is how to e...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y are today. They even quarrel sometimes and blame each other on the topic of mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, therefore, while, for instance, i feel, in addition, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 419.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28400954654 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37307604376 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.463007159905 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.0462183665 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0434782609 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2173913043 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.17391304348 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121968578015 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448525687231 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373005908976 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081549349406 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235011463269 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 10.9000537634 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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