Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air. What are these problems and how might they be reduced?
It goes without saying that pollution is one of the most important issues facing us nowadays. And in this day and age, we can see that many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with air pollution, water pollution and even soil pollution. This essay will analyze the problems that many countries are dealt with and give solution on how to reduce it.
Almost every countries have problems with their environment, affecting their land, water and air. And I believe the main causes for air pollution are by building too many houses, using up lands for depositing rubbish and also the destruction of trees, which also leads to soil erosion. In addtion, by burning fossil fuels, we pump large amount of carbon dioxide and toxics gases in the air, which can lead to other serious problems like the destructrion of the protective layer of ozone, the melting of ice caps and global warming.
The main effects of the pollution is the melting of ice caps, which is caused by global warming, can lead to the rise of sea level and flooding in many countries. Moreover, dumping chemical, untreated waste into the rivers can make it polluted, which results in the death of many fish and shortage of clean water
Perhaps the most helpful thing that we can do to reduce it now is to persuade the government to stop building on certain areas to allow spaces for planting more trees. Moreover, we should use public transport more frequently insteadi of taking your cars wherever you want to go. Furthermore, we should you more biodegradable materials. We should limit the use of plastic, nylon,… as its takes a really long time to biograde. We also need to plants more trees to prevent soil erosion.
In conclusion, as the problems that many countries have with their environment are becoming more severe, it is crucial that these measures are taken in order to ensure a healthy future for our planet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o allow spaces for planting more trees. Moreover, we should use public transport more fr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...e should limit the use of plastic, nylon,… as its takes a really long time to biog...
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Line 4, column 442, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'plant'.
Suggestion: plant
... long time to biograde. We also need to plants more trees to prevent soil erosion. In...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, really, so, as to, even so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85670731707 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53577723701 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557926829268 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2640419651 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348975173399 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125032242037 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149564877542 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204424381695 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148190219401 0.056905535591 260% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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