Many countries are experiencing serious problems with their environment, with pollution of their land, water and air.
What are these problems and how might they be reduced?
As the society is advancing by leaps and bounds, the attitude people adopt towards pollution has undergone a noticeable and far-reaching transformation. Under this circumstances, the fact that the downgrading of nature caused by humans has been thrown into a sharp focus. Hence, it is imperative that people should analyze the possible reasons and effective remedies for this phenomenon.
The causes of this phenomenon are manifold. Firstly, it is in large measure attributed to the ever-increasing living tempo. In fact, many studies have shown that although it is invisible, the inflation of density nowadays lead to over-exploitation natural resources served for humans’ needs. Secondly, another reasons that has added fuel to the fire is that people diffuse responsibility among themselves with no-one feeling that they ought to be the one to help. According to researches, having no responsibility feeling is the reason directly make the pollution problems being more worse and still going to increase at this moment. For example, many companies are shake off their moral to benefit their budget, economic and push their duty to another.
To crack this hard nut, feasible measure should be adopted without any delay. Lawmakers should put some schemes on their agenda. The first approach is that governments should enhance the overall awareness of citizens towards this problem by propaganda and education to make them realize the fact that the important of natural and how effective it is if citizens pay attention, joint efforts to solve this problem.
In conclusion, since possible culprits and feasible remedies impacts have been discussed above, this crisis can be promisingly resolved with joint efforts of relevant parties.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... and far-reaching transformation. Under this circumstances, the fact that the downgr...
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Line 2, column 579, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worse' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worse
...ectly make the pollution problems being more worse and still going to increase at this mom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45185185185 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90584765899 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.4765044594 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171398294123 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508874310896 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496602258361 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0913460050459 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593415193661 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.