Dear Stan, trust you and your family are doing great today. It has been a long time since we last saw, but I have not forgotten all the good times we spent together as teenagers.
Recently, I visited the museum which is called"The Ojukwu Bunker". This museum is situated in Umuahia, Abia State, and the address is No 45 Finbars Road. It has a land mass of about 2000 square meters, and it is known to be the biggest tourist center in eastern part of Nigeria.
Upon getting to the museum, I saw the office of the Biafran leader "Chukwuemeka Ojukwu" stayed whenever he entertained any press conferences. Secondly, I saw the situation room where the Biafran leader gave out orders to the Biafran soldiers during the Nigerian Civil War. In addition, we were showed the tunnels where Ojukwu escaped from when the Nigerian soldiers where closing in on the Biafran land.
The feeling I got after seeing those things I mentioned above in the museum was a mixed one. The history of the Nigerian Civil War kept on flashing through my mind, and it made me vakue museums for retaining such histories for the future generations.
All the best.
Adam
- Some feel that the effects of advertising are positive for individuals and businesses while others think they are negative Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 73
- Your friend s dog has recently passed away Write a letter to console your friend In your letter 1 Express your sympathy 2 Include memories you have about the dog 3 Invite your friend to do something with you 73
- People nowadays work hard to buy more things This has made our life generally more comfortable but it is a pity many traditional values have been lost on the way to such materialism To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 61
- Do you have to plan for the future Or stay focused on our present What is your opinion and why Provide examples to support your stand 56
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, secondly, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83084577114 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68725806484 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681592039801 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0301239869 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2727272727 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140388719002 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458727823761 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401901518718 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748617330485 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347967954144 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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