There is a growing concern involving around the use of networking sites replacing the direct interaction among people in oursociety in recent times. Although the virtual talk still exists many drawbacks, the advantages which it brings to us are certainly undeniable.
On the one hand, it is apparent that this trend has two common negative effects in mental and physical lives of users. One major limitation is online communication will lack practical experiences. We do not know any feelings or behaviors of partners; for example, we also can not see their lovely gestures when we inform good news. This drawback makes it hard for us to expand our communication skill. Furthermore, the other disadvantage is that too much use of social networks leads to health issues by screens of electronic devices. For example, long time of connecting by phones results in eye strain and sleeplessness. Thus, virtual conservations do have disadvantages for some individuals.
On the other hand, I believe that the advantages of this situation are even more significant. The most important one is cost-efficient because we can save travelling expenses or food & drink costs for many direct appointments. A case in point is making calls internationally on Facebook or Twitter with free of charges. As a result, online platforms give opportunities for people to interact with others around the world. In addition, this idea appropriates for people who are afraid to talk directly due to social anxiety. An illustration of this is some individuals use chat, voice calls, etc instead of having face-to-face interation. So, social media create a world with virtual communication which suits a field of people.
To conclude, while the viewpoint of communicating by online apps has some arguments because of causing health problems and lacking of soft skills, its positive effects are proven to outweigh the disadvantages in this century.
- International tourism is now more common than ever before Some feel that this is a positive trend while others do not What are your opinions on this 61
- The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European countries from 2011 to 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- The use of social media such as Facebook and Twitter is replacing face to face contact in this century Do you think the advantages of this way outweigh the disadvantages 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, while, for example, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2908496732 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1062419382 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2357715782 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2352941176 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223487181952 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620710798986 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528049562166 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115987871952 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504496825294 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.