There are many divergent views that people are not well-being with their life in recent time despite the improvements in people’s standard of living. In this essay, I will provide the reasons why I partly agree with this statement.
On the one hand, the primary reason for the unhappiness of modern citizens is that the exorbitant living costs. Nowadays, they have to work harder to pay bills such as electronic bills, petrol bills, accommodation, etc. Therefore, most members in family are stood in need of working to deal with these expenses. While I do not have to look for a job, my high school friend and his family are working down to dusk to earn money in order to cover all living expenses. He have to sacrifice his personal interests and quality time with family. Besides, housing prices are also a concern for many people, especially the medium people. They could not have their own apartment; if they have, they will take home loans. Thus, they are required to work harder to keep up with modern life which makes them feel unhappy.
However, the improvement of life also comes with the advancement of the medical industry. With surgery, the invention of robotics which save millions of lives is a shining example of this. Most of our fears are death, therefore, the less people passed away, the happier we are. Another reason is that modern machines will assist us in industrial. For example, people who are blue-collar worker to cultivate plants or raise domestic animals are supported by using machines. Furthermore, these machines are even more productive than humans and manufacture various products as a result.
In conclusion, although there are some disadvantages that make people feel unhappy by modern life, it is believed that the improvement of life also makes citizens satisfied.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... order to cover all living expenses. He have to sacrifice his personal interests and...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... of our fears are death, therefore, the less people passed away, the happier we are....
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01324503311 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60264058102 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605960264901 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8647963892 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318694466878 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876628378839 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777657281279 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200652178617 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598809683254 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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