People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, almost customers in many countries tend to use a wide diversity of food from other areas more than consume their local food. This trend has been a controversial topic of debate for a long time. I strongly opine that the advantages would outweigh the disadvantages and I will explain my view below.
On the one hand, consuming imported food can create numerous risks for humans and the environment. Firstly, increasing the number of goods being traded will definitely lead to rising petrol and diesel consumption for transportation of food. One of the causes of global warming is problematic. Additionally, some countries face imbalances in their agricultural economy when consumers are not interested in local products. For example, almost 50% of Angola's food was imported, resulting in a decline in prices for many years.
On the other hand, humans choose to use diverse foods that also offer them many benefits. Not all countries have adequate and appropriate agricultural conditions to grow vegetables or crops. The Antarctic region countries are an example, this kind of country is not able to grow food crops but they can trade with other countries by fossil fuel sources which is strength in natural resources. Besides, people who enjoy other areas are one of the most effective sources of knowledge about various cultures all over the world.
In conclusion, I believe that the positive side outlooks the other part of the topic. People should be approach more and more food culture from foreign country as well as promote quality of their county’s food.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, look, so, well, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18846153846 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77252741808 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626923076923 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9083647935 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.636363636 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336135306788 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110378995906 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861303726048 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20740285944 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515458507922 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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