Due to the development of the internet public libraries are no longer necessary To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Due to the development of the internet, public libraries are no longer necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Sophistication of technology make internet application steadily increase, the impact is place of read being not needed. I totally agree with this notion and think that every day each person prefer to use internet than visiting place to read.
Firstly, facilitate people to do activities. In other words, recently, people have a lot of job and activities and most of them nothing time to visit some place of read, they prefer to access all of what they need by internet. Moreover, internet have a million access for human to get information without go to anywhere. For instance, almost university in Indonesia have digital library and all of students can access it only with entire their identity student, so, every single person when need some book or want to read something to gather information sufficient with login in Internet and all of it will be provided. Thats why, internet more than important rather some place with offline services.
Secondly, advances of internet proved all activities with manual guided can be replaced. As we know, nowdays, internet serving anything what human need and it is very help us for finish our own project or cope our problem. Furthermore, for students and worker average of them need some material to complete their exercise or work and usually they should be visit some place to get book or know information, whereas it was decrease because internet more useful and the best reason why almost all people choice to searching on internet is because un there all types of information was available and more complete. Thus, when i am at university and want to finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from books, journals and others, but sometimes, i can't found that book on my library and i decided to browsing on my mobile phone and ultimately i found the subject what i need. Thus, internet have a million positive effect for us to completely our journey.
To conclude, information on internet more update than in some place, because everyday the system will be changed and always replaced by new news.

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
.... In other words, recently, people have a lot of job and activities and most of them nothing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'million access'.
Suggestion: million access
...ed by internet. Moreover, internet have a million access for human to get information without go...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 620, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...nternet and all of it will be provided. Thats why, internet more than important rathe...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'visited'?
Suggestion: visited
...cise or work and usually they should be visit some place to get book or know informat...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...available and more complete. Thus, when i am at university and want to finished m...
^
Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iversity and want to finished my essay, i should be gather many information about...
^
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gathered'?
Suggestion: gathered
... want to finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from bo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...o finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from books, ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...o finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from books, journals and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ks, journals and others, but sometimes, i cant found that book on my library and ...
^
Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., journals and others, but sometimes, i cant found that book on my library and i dec...
^^^^
Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... cant found that book on my library and i decided to browsing on my mobile phone ...
^
Line 3, column 869, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wsing on my mobile phone and ultimately i found the subject what i need. Thus, in...
^
Line 3, column 894, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and ultimately i found the subject what i need. Thus, internet have a million pos...
^
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...more update than in some place, because everyday the system will be changed and always r...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91737891738 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60697616122 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.3512685184 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108344998745 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467177061809 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115478479491 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681577847002 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208074547859 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun job seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of jobs'.
Suggestion: a lot of jobs
.... In other words, recently, people have a lot of job and activities and most of them nothing...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 251, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'million access'.
Suggestion: million access
...ed by internet. Moreover, internet have a million access for human to get information without go...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 620, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...nternet and all of it will be provided. Thats why, internet more than important rathe...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'visited'?
Suggestion: visited
...cise or work and usually they should be visit some place to get book or know informat...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 623, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...available and more complete. Thus, when i am at university and want to finished m...
^
Line 3, column 673, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iversity and want to finished my essay, i should be gather many information about...
^
Line 3, column 685, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gathered'?
Suggestion: gathered
... want to finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from bo...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...o finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from books, ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 692, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...o finished my essay, i should be gather many information about my essay from books, journals and...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 772, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ks, journals and others, but sometimes, i cant found that book on my library and ...
^
Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
..., journals and others, but sometimes, i cant found that book on my library and i dec...
^^^^
Line 3, column 813, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... cant found that book on my library and i decided to browsing on my mobile phone ...
^
Line 3, column 869, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...wsing on my mobile phone and ultimately i found the subject what i need. Thus, in...
^
Line 3, column 894, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and ultimately i found the subject what i need. Thus, internet have a million pos...
^
Line 4, column 78, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...more update than in some place, because everyday the system will be changed and always r...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91737891738 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60697616122 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547008547009 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.3512685184 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.769230769 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108344998745 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467177061809 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0115478479491 0.0667982634062 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681577847002 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208074547859 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.