You have learned from a new article that a real estate company is going to build a shopping center near your home. However, you think that the shopping center should not be built there. Write a letter to the city counsellor.
In your Letter :
- Say how you learned about the plan
- Explain how it is going to affect the residential area
- Say what you think the city council to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I reside at Jitodia Street in Anand and this letter is regarding an upcoming construction planned near our residential area.
While reading the “Local Samachar” newspaper dated 4th April, I came across an article advocating the positive implications of a new shopping center for the town. I welcome this move but not on the same page with the location chosen for the construction.
I reckon that this might create some issues for the people who are residing in the surrounding areas. Firstly, as the dearth of public parking space is already a burning issue in the city, this amenity will ameliorate the parking problems. Secondly, the area will become busier and the neighborhood will have to face a great degree of disturbance in their day-to-day life such as traffic jams and noise pollution.
Even though keeping in mind the importance of such infrastructures, I request you to relocate the shopping center place from the heart of the city to the outskirts. It will be a great relief for all people in my area.
Hoping for prompt action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Ronak Patel
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, i reckon, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76126852971 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691489361702 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.803088711 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154523326235 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553087854741 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579754013544 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809907141828 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512527288677 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.