You have learned from a new article that a real estate company is going to build a shopping center near your home. However, you think that the shopping center should not be built there. Write a letter to the city counsellor.
In your Letter :
- Say how you learned about the plan
- Explain how it is going to affect the residencial area
- Say what you think the city council to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am residing at Jitodia street in Anand and this letter is in regards to an upcoming construction planned near our residential area.
While reading the “Local Samachar” newspaper dated on 4th April, I came across an article which was advocating the positive implications of a new shopping center for the town. I welcome this move but not on the same page with the location chosen for the construction.
I reckon that this might create some issues for the people who are residing in the surrounding areas. Firstly, as dearth of public parking space is already a burning issue in the city, this amenity will ameliorate the parking problems. Secondly, the area will become more busy and the neighbourhood will have to face a great degree of disturbance in their day-to-day life such as traffic jams and noise pollution.
Eventhough keeping in mind the importance of such infrastructures, I request you to relocate the place of shopping center from heart of the city to the outskirts. It will be a great reliefe for all people in my area.
Hoping for the prompt action from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Ronak Patel
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...odia street in Anand and this letter is in regards to an upcoming construction planned near o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e city, this amenity will ameliorate the parking problems. Secondly, the area wil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, i reckon, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97422680412 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79302020133 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4860729536 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153355037508 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552760738625 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591290142858 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808383556366 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527000943928 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 61, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
...odia street in Anand and this letter is in regards to an upcoming construction planned near o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e city, this amenity will ameliorate the parking problems. Secondly, the area wil...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, i reckon, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97422680412 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79302020133 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.680412371134 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4860729536 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153355037508 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552760738625 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591290142858 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808383556366 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527000943928 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.