Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the contemporary era, modern infrastructures and transporatations require a significant amount of fossil fuels on the daily basis. Due to heavy demand and limited resources, current sources are not able to supply the ongoing demand. To overcome this issue, it has became a need of an hour to explore some far away areas and unexplored places to find newer sources of fossil fuels. Wether it leads to more positive implications or more drawbacks is a debatable mater. Personally, I think that it has more negatives as compared to its positive side, which would be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with the brighter side, it is an undeniable fact that finding new sources of fossil fuel will make sure that there will be enough oil and gas to fulfill the heay demand of fossil fuels. Apart from that, while finding such resources in remote areas, there will be less disturbance in the city life. To exemplify, there will be less air pollution, noise pollution and impact on urban areas as the mining of oil and gas will be done in outskirts of the cities. Hence, it can be said that exploring new places for fossil fuels will be advantageous in above matters.
Howerver, while talking about its darker side, it would cause a significant amount of damage to the environment and nature. Firstly, it will spoil the environment by causing airpollution and noise pollution. Secondly, the natural habitats will be disturbed in remote areas because for finding new resources, it will require a huge amount of land digging. Last but not the least, the newer sources of fossil fuels will ultimately create more air pollution as it will be used by modern factories and for transportation.
Additionally, to establish new sources of fossil fuels, it demands heavy budget and investment in modern machinery. Insted of wastig money for such exploration, it would be more practical to fulfill the basic necessities of people such as education, medical and better working opportunities. Furthermore, it can create a chaos in the rival countries such as Russia and USA or India and Pakistan. There might be chance of war between such nations for claiming the new sources of the fossil fuels.
To recapitulate, despite of having some merits of finding new alternative resources of fossil fuels, its drawbacks clearly outweigh its brighter side by damaging environment, higher cost and chances of tentions between two countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 268, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... demand. To overcome this issue, it has became a need of an hour to explore some far a...
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Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
... would be more practical to fulfill the basic necessities of people such as education, medical an...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s brighter side by damaging environment, higher cost and chances of tentions betw...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, as to, i think, such as, talking about, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03473945409 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85112850313 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506203473945 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9117789777 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.722222222 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3888888889 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72222222222 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20673691985 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658181468679 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536910452247 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112027234929 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308896190148 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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