In some countries, more and more adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that even after graduating from schools and having jobs, there is an increase in the number of young people continuing to live with their parents, in some nations. Personally, I would argue that the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages.
On the one hand, staying with parents allows the young to cope with insurmountable issues. Firstly, fresh graduates and novice workers normally cannot earn enough money yet cover their living expenses if they live independently; therefore, staying with family helps them to save money and build up their financial stability, as they split the costs with their parents. Secondly, living under one roof helps family members provide emotional support and a sense of security, especially during difficult times. For example, when they are sick or in a sad mood, parents can be a valuable source to take care of them, listen to their concerns, and give guidance.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the advantages. If there are differences in opinions or lifestyles, living with parents can lead to conflicts and tensions. For example, parents may have strict religious beliefs that their children do not agree with which can cause disagreement. In addition, living with parents may mean that personal boundaries are not respected. Children may feel like they have no privacy, or parents may feel like they have no control over their children's behavior.
In conclusion, despite such apparent negative aspects, the practice of continuing to live with parents, when finishing education and finding employment, has more benefits to offer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in addition, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26717557252 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70144895695 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606870229008 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4576675718 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347944589894 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112490299416 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533903139249 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195843246545 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310049998502 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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