Corporate Responsibility
Corporations are organizations that are formed with the aim of making profits. There exists many different types of companies in the world. Among the many types of companies that exists are the types that use natural resources as raw materials to make profits. In some cases these natural resources are in places inhabited by people. It is only fair that these natural resources benefits the people living in those areas. Equally, companies are responsible for ensuring that they run a sustainable use of the natural resources. Therefore, Companies that utilize natural resources in a particular community have a responsibility to promote well being of the people in the area and also protect the environment.
Mining companies are the perfect example. In the world, exists many minerals which are very important for various purposes. These minerals are found in different parts of the world. Mining companies locate these areas and set up mines. However most of these areas are communities where people live. it is morally correct that the mining companies that set up mines in such places contribute to the development of such places. After all the minerals belong to the indigenous people. Vandetta, a mining company in Zambia recognizes that they have a social responsibility to uplift the lives of people. The company has built hospitals , schools for the local people and provides scholarship for students within the communities they operate on. Furthermore, mining operation are known to produce waste products. These wastes if not taken care of properly, have the capacity to cause pollution and harm the environment. Konkola copper mine in Zimbabwe cause pollution by dumping mine wastes in rivers, harming aquatic organisms. there for continued operation of the mining companies it is there responsibility to ensure the environment is protected through proper handling of waste products.
The Timber industry is another great illustration of the need for companies to protect trees. Timber is obtained through the cutting down of trees to be used as raw materials. For this practice to remain sustainable, it is imperative that trees re replanted as much as they are cut down. Companies that cut down trees, thus have the responsibility to make sure that trees are being replanted. This measure will ensure that the environment is protected from degradation. In order to prevent deforestation, the government of China implemented a law that every company that produces timber should always replant trees at the same rate as they cut down to protect the environment. This rule has ensured the continued production of timber.
Companies producing hydroelectricity ought to improve the community they operate in. The production of electricity requires a great volume of water. Before the production begins. A dam has to be built along a river. This causes many disruptions to the lives people living in such areas. people are displaced from their homes, others lose their source of livelihood in fishing. Companies tend to compensate these people by providing them alternative employment. Zesco a company in Zambia built school hospitals and a trade school for people in Kariba where a hydro power station was built to uplift the lives of people living there. in this way the people were compensated for the dam built which initially disrupted what was the main source of income.
Others may argue that companies pay huge amount of taxes to governments and thus shouldn't be required to further be burdened with social responsibility. Admittedly corporations pay a huge chunk of their profits ti governments.In turn governments used these taxes to develop the country. however, these taxes are usually for the government expenses and rarely do they reflect the development of communities in which the companies operation. Katanga region in Congo houses so many mines due to abundant minerals it possesses. yet it remained underdeveloped for years when companies paid only taxes to the government. only when companies too up social development projects with the communities has there been significant development. therefore to ensure that people benefits. Companies should take up social responsibilities to develop the communities they operate in addition to the taxes paid.
In conclusion, it is the responsibilities of companies that use natural resources to develop societies in which they operate in . It is also their duty to ensure the environment is protected by proper handling of wastes and through sustainable use of such resources.
- Educators should teach facts only after their students have studied the ideas trends and concepts that help explain those facts 75
- Corporate Responsibility 44
- Jazz Music Club 73
- growth of town 16
- Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student s field of study 67
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the aim of making profits. There exists many different types of companies in the world. Among ...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es locate these areas and set up mines. However most of these areas are communities whe...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...reas are communities where people live. it is morally correct that the mining comp...
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Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bute to the development of such places. After all the minerals belong to the indigeno...
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Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... uplift the lives of people. The company has built hospitals , schools for the lo...
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Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...people. The company has built hospitals , schools for the local people and provid...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...s in rivers, harming aquatic organisms. there for continued operation of the mining c...
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Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icity requires a great volume of water. Before the production begins. A dam has to be ...
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Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: People
... the lives people living in such areas. people are displaced from their homes, others ...
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Suggestion: In
...plift the lives of people living there. in this way the people were compensated fo...
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Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Others may argue that companies pay huge amount of taxes to governments and ...
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Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...amount of taxes to governments and thus shouldnt be required to further be burdened with...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e chunk of their profits ti governments.In turn governments used these taxes to de...
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Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...sed these taxes to develop the country. however, these taxes are usually for the govern...
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Line 9, column 421, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...development of communities in which the companies operation. Katanga region in Congo hous...
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Line 9, column 526, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
... due to abundant minerals it possesses. yet it remained underdeveloped for years wh...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
...nies paid only taxes to the government. only when companies too up social developmen...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...has there been significant development. therefore to ensure that people benefits. Compani...
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Line 9, column 733, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...has there been significant development. therefore to ensure that people benefits. Compani...
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Line 11, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...velop societies in which they operate in . It is also their duty to ensure the env...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3840.0 2235.4752809 172% => OK
No of words: 722.0 442.535393258 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31855955679 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18363363724 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96590929225 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423822714681 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1240.2 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 20.2370786517 227% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.015379841 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4782608696 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6956521739 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78260869565 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.83258426966 372% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974085434485 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237255446832 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486873385502 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602481195152 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406548883509 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 100.480337079 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...the aim of making profits. There exists many different types of companies in the world. Among ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es locate these areas and set up mines. However most of these areas are communities whe...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...reas are communities where people live. it is morally correct that the mining comp...
^^
Line 3, column 427, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...bute to the development of such places. After all the minerals belong to the indigeno...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 612, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... uplift the lives of people. The company has built hospitals , schools for the lo...
^^
Line 3, column 633, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...people. The company has built hospitals , schools for the local people and provid...
^^
Line 3, column 1026, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...s in rivers, harming aquatic organisms. there for continued operation of the mining c...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Before” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...icity requires a great volume of water. Before the production begins. A dam has to be ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 288, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
... the lives people living in such areas. people are displaced from their homes, others ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 633, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...plift the lives of people living there. in this way the people were compensated fo...
^^
Line 9, column 36, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Others may argue that companies pay huge amount of taxes to governments and ...
^^
Line 9, column 83, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
...amount of taxes to governments and thus shouldnt be required to further be burdened with...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 228, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...e chunk of their profits ti governments.In turn governments used these taxes to de...
^^
Line 9, column 289, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...sed these taxes to develop the country. however, these taxes are usually for the govern...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 421, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...development of communities in which the companies operation. Katanga region in Congo hous...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 526, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yet
... due to abundant minerals it possesses. yet it remained underdeveloped for years wh...
^^^
Line 9, column 617, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Only
...nies paid only taxes to the government. only when companies too up social developmen...
^^^^
Line 9, column 733, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...has there been significant development. therefore to ensure that people benefits. Compani...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 733, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...has there been significant development. therefore to ensure that people benefits. Compani...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...velop societies in which they operate in . It is also their duty to ensure the env...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, after all, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 33.0505617978 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 108.0 58.6224719101 184% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3840.0 2235.4752809 172% => OK
No of words: 722.0 442.535393258 163% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31855955679 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.18363363724 4.55969084622 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96590929225 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 215.323595506 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.423822714681 0.4932671777 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1240.2 704.065955056 176% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 46.0 20.2370786517 227% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.015379841 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4782608696 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6956521739 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.78260869565 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.83258426966 372% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0974085434485 0.243740707755 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237255446832 0.0831039109588 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486873385502 0.0758088955206 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602481195152 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406548883509 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 48.8420337079 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 165.0 100.480337079 164% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.